All Comments on 'The Devil's Advocate'

Evil indeed, fueled by lust, desire. Well written and hoping there is a follow up or two to this one. O:-)

It was written really well. Not my normal type of story but I couldn't stop reading it!

This was good. I enjoyed it for two reasons. It was well described without being incredibly slow, but it didn't blur past all the details. It was also well written without major typos. I will admit that sometimes I will leave a story because the writer just is unable to spell or doesn't understand basic grammar. While that's petty of me, it is a nice to find writers who knows what they are doing, such as you!

Please, continue writing. You have an almost poetic writing style, and I believe it works for you. Would love to see a follow up story.

would love to see another chapter or two