The Devil's Bargain Ch. 13

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Holly had dropped plenty of hints that her situation might change dramatically in a year or two. Heck - my situation could change. I wasn't sure how, but ... anything is possible, right? I could move, change jobs ...

Or I could go to see Tansa, and give her the year I owed her.

What if I did find the perfect woman? What if it was Holly? How could I explain it? 'Sorry love, I have to go away for a year. No, I can't tell you why.'

Wasn't this a perfect opportunity to discharge my debt?

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InosolanInosolanover 1 year ago

Someone said about dogs and cats and ...

"They give us so much. And they hardly ask anything in return.

"Just a piece of your soul."

anubeloreanubeloreover 1 year ago

Poor Freya. What a good girl. I hope this decision to discharge his debt doesn't backfire on Dan...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I look forward to the next part

pcman1950pcman1950over 1 year ago

Nothing about this tale has flagged in any way. Despite Tansa magic the characters continue to present as plausible and 'real'; not merely fictions of your imagination. And, despite the hedonistic license afforded by the contract with Tansa, Dan is not merely pursuing his own sexual gratification, but is learning something about himself and the women with whom he's become involved. In the midst of passion there is also pathos. I do hope that despite the loquacious and effluvious nature of some comments that you'll continue to share with us your creative mind. You're an edgy Canadian treasure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Another spectacular chapter and that includes you making me cry my eyes out at Freya taking a well deserved but very painful rest. It is rather interesting that this guy makes a deal with the devil which usually means that he is somewhat of a scumbag but Dan ends up treating these women better than any other boyfriend they ever had. I usually avoid stories like this but you hooked me fast and continued to deliver an amazing story that I always look forward to seeing more of.

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