All Comments on 'The Devil's Inheritance Ch. 02'

SO GOOD. all i can say is wow. I cannot wait for the third chapter, please let us read it soon!

I simply MUST know what happens between these two!

i can see this developing into a love story. I like it when reluctance turns into love. your a great writer! please do not keep us waiting this story is too good :)

love it love it love it love it love it! that is all

Of a top romantic novel. Your first story in all honesty was a bit amateurishly contrived, history is difficult. The Bronte genius is fiction imagining Of Their Time. This is so much better, though again in so many ways a weaving of different period norms. I wanted this tech note before offering Ultra Compliments on writing well woven graphic sex scenes without explicit oaths, physical threats, or violence- and at such hot length while carefully hinting/sowing the emotional seeds of attachment and love. The kernel and comfort d'etre of the site. Even if variety is . . .

This seems to have the structure and research potential of a full length hotly sexed romantic novel, with some original theme. Works at many and various reader levels. Well done, seems crass, but meant.

Reading in full. No matter how horny, romantic, or Love hungry you feel. It fulfils. In itself, or as a chapter,

of a class hot rom. story.

Goodness, this was good! I enjoyed every bit of it, though twice in one night right after she just lost her virginity that same day? That girl has gusto haha.

Looking forward to reading the rest, cannot wait! On to the next chapter!!

Just loved it, so excited to see where this goes. Great character development!!

Haha turnabout is fair play

Your story is soo hot... I have read it soo many times. It makes me wet and bothered each time. Write new stories please.