All Comments on 'The Devil's Inheritance Ch. 05'

You can't leave it like that!!!! You're cruel right now!!! lol

OMG!!!

It was a great chapter but hurry up with the next. you can't leave it hanging like that lol

Soo......she is preggers? lol I hope so. That would be a sight to see......him returning back after a month or two...and finding her with a curved tummy, a little bump.... hahahahaha

Great story,i cried a loot.i love sophia&james.i love it...thanks. (ppt)

Well this is simply agonizing! I ban you from weekend getaways now! GET TO WRITING WOMAN!!! This is just too good!!!

Can you say cliffhanger? I love it, hurry, hurry, please hurry!!!!

I am dying to know what is going to happen! love this story, great writing!!

I just discovered this story last week, and there's so much potential for further conflict and build-up for these characters. Only one more chapter? Awww, but it's just getting real good. Could it really all be solved with just one chapter? I hope the ending fits it.

Thank you for this story. I greatly look forward to reading more of your work.

omgosh i was owrried if that would have been the endin i would have been furious lol but ur stories are awesome!

please finish the story!

what a cliffhanger! I am anxious to read more. Fabulous story.

i seriously cannot handle this. i dont come to literotica that often and i dont read stories over weeks and weeks and i cant believe there's not the last part I'M FREAKING OUT PLEASE FINISH THE STORY BEFORE I EXPLODE YOU LEFT IT SO HORRIBLY AND THE REST IS SO GOOD. aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. SLKFJSLDJFSDLKFJSLKFJDSLKJFS. can't handle it!

please finish story before i die

Loving this ...you write the emotions and the sex exceptionally !

Another tremendous chapter. All the details are revealed in a suspenseful and romantic combination that is truly captivating. Very well done.

It was so full of love then heart break. My heart goes out to both of them. Lov this story. Going to the next

Wow uncle David played them both but apparently for good reason

I haven't been able to stop reading since chapter 1. You're an amazing erotica writer.

I am really pleased to let you know that your story is a great interesting read. Been stuck on it. Great job.

I will admit it, this chapter made me cry. Very good writing that draws you in to the characters and makes you feel them. Love it.