All Comments on 'The Devil's Inheritance Ch. 06'

Thank you for finishing this story. I was so excited when i saw a new chapter had been published. I love happy endings!

The story was extreemly well written and the story line and characters were detail and well developed. BRAVO!!!!!

:-)

Thankyou for finishing this story, I thought it was amazing. well done =)

This story was so magical from start to finish. Thank you so much for the wonderful writing and for captivating me chapter after chapter. I hope that you'll continue to write and I wish there were a million more authors like you because I don't think I could ever get enough of stories like this. Bravo and encore.

No! It can't be over!!!

Too good! Too good!

This story was really well written and I loved every chapter. Keep up the great work and continue with your writing - really enjoyed this.

Nice ending. I enjoyed this story completely from beginning to end.

Thank you for posting it here!

Dear Sushi, a beautifully written and well edited story, erotic and romantic with just that dash of melodrama and a happy ending - appealed to the romantic and avid reader in me ! I look forward to your next series !

OMG... Here comes another romantic stories of the year. It was so touching how you write this stories. Keep going and write more please. This story is soooo gooodd...

that's all I wanted to say, "yay!"

I believe it is a destiny, when you put it in non consent genre, since i was exploring to that genre. But i think it is supposed to be in romance ya. This is a good story. Like reading the story from Johanna Lindsay or Julie Garwood. Nicely written. Cant wait for the next stories you have in store for us.

its just beautiful

I have no words for how amazing it truely was!

This was beautiful and extremely well written! I enjoyed reading it very much!

I was bored and looking for something to read for a little while last night when I stumbled across this story. (Honestly, I was looking for something quick and short. LOL) Needless to say, I was sucked into the story and the characters. This is a very well written story that is intruguing and captivating. I loved seeing the differences among each chapter as you became a more confident writer. I hope you continue.

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one of my new favorites. james gardiner is quite dreamy...

I have to agree with the comment below, James is seriously dreamy!! :)

I have to admit... a lot of the time I come here for the elicit stories with graphic detail but... your story-telling is so amazing that I found myself skimming the sexy bits trying to get to the actual story towards the end. I must say, this was absolutely amazing! I just HAD to know what happens next, I read the entire thing in like 2 hours... and I plan on reading it many times more. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with all of us!

You are a wonderful storyteller. Thank you so much for a great read!

Fantastic story. Every chapter drew me in. So glad they were all here when I came along. I would have been in agony waiting for another installment. I can't wait to read more of your writings.

Love it love it love it!!!! :)

My goodness this was an awesome tale..you should write some more..Good job :)

I really enjoyed your writing! Can't wait for your one. Thank You!

This story was one of the best I have read, it had substance, not just sex. :)

This was fantastic and was the right mix of everything. I hope you write more stories!

Please write more! You can create the perfect mix serious fiction and erotic excitement.

I have never read a story on here all the way through, nor have I read one out of pure interest rather than simple erotic enjoyments. Definitely the best thing I have read on here ever.

I usually cum then close a story but I kept coming back to read. I laid in bed today reading all six chapters. Dear God if you don't write more I will be very very sad.

This story was just truly amazing. I wish you would a continuation of the story to little David and his pursuits. This is erotically romantic and a story the can turn me on, make me laugh, and even at times make me cry tears of joy. I have become so familiar with these characters that I just want more story and depth. Maybe even do a prequel to this story. Like I said I don't just as long as I don't start saying that you should publish as a book. Make it longer and with more sex drama and truly show how their love truly blossomed.

I found myself skipping the sex parts to see what happened next in the story! Don't get me wrong, the sex was very hot.

I loved the characters, especially the Dutch woman and her daughter. The whore in London was fabulous, and oh I could go on and on. All the characters were brilliantly wrought.

The descriptions of the country, the smells, the light, the landscape..

Just the right touch of melodrama, too.

Thank you for sharing :-)

P.S. This definitely has potential for more chapters.

hahaha, me too i skip the sex part just to know what happen,, happy ending. And read all over again this time every bit of it.. thanks so much for writing such a passionate story.

I love the Sophia character. I'm always a sucker for a girl who has misfortunes after misfortunes but finds the ultimate happiness in the end.

Great job.

As per previous comments found myself skipping the sex scenes to find out what happened, love the happy ending :) Fantastic characters, fantastic writing.

I admire the story and your writing. Here are some suggestions if you are open to some revision. I think they would help the story.

1. James does a complete reversal in his character. It needs to be more believable that he wasn't a total ass in the beginning and in later scenes. Maybe more clues as to why he was so jaded, more clues that he was gradually falling for her.

2. I would shorten some of the descriptions. There was so much of it that they slow down the flow of the plot. Some other readers had commented skipping passages to find out what happens next.

I think you have a good handle on the time period, characters and dialogue. I hope you can stretch into a published piece. Good luck!

The way you use words and language, the understanding of the culture and dress of the times, the deep feeling for the psychology of the characters makes me sure that you are a published romance author. If you are not, you certainly should take steps to become one. Your gift should be shared. I would like to know your published name so I could purchase your work, and share you with my friends and family.

Thanks for this story, it was lovely to read.

I think the previous comments sum it up ...if your not published,you should be .SUPERB.!

Outstanding story ..... You have a gift with words ... I recommend this to everyone you will not be disappointed ... Amazing ... Look forward to reading more of your work ... Thank you

I absolutely love this story. You're a very gifted writer. Hope you keep writing more :)

lovely

Great story great ending... really enjoyed this one

I could write a lot about what i liked about the story and nothing about it that i hated.

But in short,

Really loved the story

And i'm lmfao at the tags..

Bodice ripper.

Seriously?? Literotica sure has a great sense of humour in the way it tags the stories.

Cant stop laughing.

have not been back to lit in awhile so I see that you have posted a lot more stories on other websites..I was hoping you would post in your bio what websites those where apart from your tumblr since you say you post on wordpress also

I love Julia common sense.

Really would like to read a lot more from you

Very nice Story with a happy ending. I miss a bit more Drama but is only my opinion. 5 stars anyway.

This has to be one of the warmest and most satisfying little stories on the site. The author is a true master of the craft.

Thank you for sharing.

What a great story, and the sex is rather steamy. Kudos to you for writing a great little series! Thank you for the pleasure.

This is a great story! However, morning sickness does not happen only in the mornings, but all day and it does not usually start until about 6 weeks or so into the pregnancy. Still, very good story.