All Comments on 'The Devil's Pact Pt. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great update as usual but it feels like we skipped a chapter, it reads like this was meant to be chapter 9.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'm confused. In chapter 7, you had the chapter end with Sister Louise starting to turn Mark's thralls. And chapter 8 has Sister Louise already defeated. It feels like you skipped an entire chapter.

dlj403dlj403over 2 years ago

Like the other two say, there appears to be a missing chapter here.

draco352draco352over 2 years ago

Why did you leave out the whole attempt to capture Mark and build some piece meal run down?

Was looking forward to that part!!

dlj403dlj403over 2 years ago

So now that Chapter 9 is out, it has the same text as Chapter 8. Can we please get the real Chapter 8?

mypenname3000mypenname3000over 2 years agoAuthor

This is part 9 uploaded as part 8. Sorry. I have part 8 working through system. I hpoe. THere's no easy way to replace a published version that I can see. Hopefully it won't be long. Very sorry. Literotica's control over your own stories is so shit.

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