by Sy23
What don't you understand about BDSM or fetish? They trump LW and this garbage belongs elsewhere. It was a complete waste of time.
1 star
I couldn't get into it. Don't know why, just couldn't so I skimmed and well here I am.
If you want to submit, submit to your husband, not some random stranger for god's sake!
.... it appears that you did not finish reading the story. It was her husband, and they were playing a fun game. I enjoyed the read and am happy that the end was a good one.
But at least I understood it, and appreciated decent writing skills.
Such a vivid story, it was so clear in every moment how she felt. Absolutely brilliant.
Tess (UK)
Your story is magnificent. The incredible attention to the smallest detail, all the tension ramping up in her mind only- all combine to make it a masterful erotic story. I'll read this over and over again.
I understand the story, but give no more than *2 to any story with submissive in title.