All Comments on 'The Digressions of Daphnie Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Love

Love to see that Ch. 01. I am so looking forward to the ensuing chapters. Nice start and thanks.

imurddyimurddyabout 13 years ago
i dont know

It seems to me that one page stories just start to get interesting, then they're done. I could be the only one who thinks that, but I don't think so. This was a good story, but I wish there had been more. Also, it seems to take the author a long time to write the next chapters, some of whom never come back to the thread, leaving the reader frustrated. I hope that isn't the case here. Still, it was good, so I gave it a four.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Seems promising . . .

A famous novelist once said that there are no second acts in American lives. Whether that's true or not, for quite a few writers on this site there is, sadly, no impetus for a second act/chapter. I do hope you won't prove to be one of them. Please continue.

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