All Comments on 'The Dinner Date'

The last line gave me a great laugh, Thank You.

And the rest was pretty good too.

and an excellent, well-written story. Thank you.

The last line certainly brought a very pleasant laugh.

The ending was a wonderful surprise.

I need to send this to a woman who keeps tossing guys who treat her like Platinum into the Friend Zone.

Nice twist at the end!

Wow...why would Dave setup the woman he loves up with a married man?

LOL.

That was very merry ! Ha ha...

@ ariesgirl : It was a set up of Susan by the other three .

Very good dialogue, love that kicker . 4*s

AMerryMan

VERY WELL DONE...5 stars!!!....LOL.

beggars shall ride and I cant wait for the next company party. TK U MLJ LV NV

to wake up when it counted. it's just too bad she took so long to realize how she had been using him for her own selfish purposes.

nice little romantic story.

thank you

and an even better than expected ending, which I didn't see coming at all.

Super finish! Never expected such a twist!

Nice wrap to a sweet storybook.

I was just a minute or so from having Dave drop money on the table and leaving the restaurant - and I DON'T mean WITH Susan.

She'd have returned from watching her "date" getting a blowjob (without Jonathan and Jackie being married as part of the story) and no Dave.

I'm not saying I'd know how much work she'd have had to put into just repairing their friendship let alone discovering he loved her (which also had the chance of becoming past tense) but it wouldn't have been enjoyable for her...

I liked her epiphany and the Jonathan and Jackie spin at the end...

I really like it overall, but I didn't like the twist at the end. Most of the story was about a woman discovering truth and then the other shoe drops when you revealed that that discovery resulted from a lie. The twist didn't fit the theme of the rest of the story, at least in my opinion.

A very entertaining tale. It also has a couple of primary charters who are very real and not uncommon in the real world.

Worth five stars

Great writing.

Certainly didn't expect the conclusion.

One of the best stories I have read

I suspected that Jonathon and Jackie were in on the game & that only made it sweeter.

Funny, I looked at the comments just before adding this one and realized that GriffyD_Boy wrote exactly what I was thinking. Then I saw it was 8 years ago, wow. I loved the story until the reveal, as it was so inconsistent with the theme of the bulk of the plot.

Last line pushed it from 4 stars to 5