All Comments on 'The Dinner Party'

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fleetusafleetusaover 14 years ago
Excellent but

Well written and great turn of phrase throughout, but I think it would have been more believable if she didn't have so much wine. Hard to be practically passed out and then have so much enjoyable sex. A better scenario might have been for her to be tired after long work days/jet lag, etc. Just my thoughts....

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