All Comments on 'The Divide'

by Gweall

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divalisciouskimdivalisciouskimover 12 years ago
yayyy!!!!!! something to read

I loved it, a wonderful tale of deception,unity regardless of physical appearances and of a love lost and then found....just beautiful and touching as usual, wouldn't expect anything else from a great novellist as yourself...Thank you for the story...hope to read more from you soon

RikonaRikonaover 12 years ago

i am in love with this story!

honestsoulhonestsoulover 12 years ago
as always..

u are fabulous...thanks for taking the time...i've always thought that there should be more stories about dragons...they are way more magical nfantastic than vampires or weres...great work...

Aftermath82Aftermath82over 12 years ago
GOSH

Gweall, I loved this.. I adore both your dark and sweet story.. Thanks for sharing this

xSpiral82xSpiral82over 12 years ago
Oh damn!

Hehe wow! Terrin is so stubborn xD A great story about bonding friendship, and acceptance. Love it!

nomoretears00nomoretears00over 12 years ago
Wow!

That was simply the best! This: "That simple concept that Humanity isn't a species, it's a state of mind." That made my whole damn month.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Omg!! Wow

that was amazing!!!! I loved the story and the whole dragon theme was lovely! This definitely gets 5 stars from me!

The characters were so lovable, especially zan I'd love to read another story with zan and Terran in this world

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great work :3 chu

you never cease to amaze me, even if i haven't commented on any other of your stories, i think it's time to say i really enjoyed this. chu :3

NightTempestNightTempestover 12 years ago
*sighs*

Whew...loved that ending. I love a good tension building story and then throw in some dragons and yes lord. Awesome job! 5 stars.

xoxo

~Night

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
awsome!!

my god i love this story.

i want to hear more of zan and terrin.

ps. whats with all the spaces in between the words?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
what a great story :)

I love reading all your stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
WOW amazing! (:

seriously in love with this story!

You should defiantly do more I can't get enough! :D

Great work love the dragon/human world ;)

xx

chibicakeschibicakesover 12 years ago
Great

Loved the world you created. Would love to see more. Great job. I truly enjoyed the building of the story. Better then a wham bam thank you mam any day.

xoxo

C.

canndcanndover 12 years ago

One of your BEST, possibly THE BEST story you've written. I really enjoyed this. What a great story with an imaginative world and a beautiful tale. I really was drawn into the story. I loved how descriptive it was. It really was wonderful. Keep writing!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Lo amo!!!!

está tan coól muerooooo!! Kawainess level le over 9000!! Jajaja es bien chevere especialmente que tiene es un final bien y vivieron felices para siempre ;) and then cuando el dice my mate awwwww^^ teehe anyway love it bye

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

That was great :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Awesome story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Beautiful! Just plain beautiful!!!

LavonyaLavonyaover 10 years ago
I love this!!!

This is thee longest one-shots I've /ever/ read!!!

It is also one of the /BEST/ and most detailed stories I've read so far!!!!

canndcanndover 10 years ago
Just as good as the first time

I saw it come up on comments and took a look at which story it was and decided to read it again. I loved this one and was only left with one question....will poor Zan be left alone at the end of Terrin's short life or will his life be extended by being mated to a dragon? Great story. Hope you're well G!

tendermentstendermentsalmost 10 years ago
You can't be serious

One shot my ass.... Why are you leaving us with so many questions? Is their future bright or is it tragic

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
just a thought ?

Gweall , you are one of my favourite authors on this site and you throw out a quickie story like this , whilst continuing your other main stories. Wow. What an imagination you have. Hats off to you my friend. Keep writing. Just loved this story.

simonjessex@Hotmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
awesome story

I wasn't sure what this was going to turn out to be when I started reading it but I couldn't pull myself away and loved every minute of it. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I love love love this story.

It's my second time reading it, and it's just as great as the first. It just draws you in. Now I'm left obsessing over whether other dragons will find their mates in humans, and if they will ever find a way to bring back the nearly extinct clan.

poreyb1999poreyb1999over 6 years ago
I love it

This is probably my third time reading this story and each time is like the first, the characters are so life like (even if some are dragons). I would love to see a second part to this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
your the best

Gweall, I have read all your stories on this site. I still think this is one of your best. It always reduces me to tears. No disrespect to your other stories, but this one does it for me. Thank you xxx

simonjessex@hotmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Good but could use work.

The story was good overall but the formatting could use some work. The dialogue was a bit cheesy at times but generally pretty good. My biggest issue which is just personal preference is that dragons could turn human. I just personally dislike that trope as it makes dragons less special as well as the fact that I find dragons much more attractive then people so I prefer that hot dragon on human action vs the human on human action you chose. But great job nonetheless keep it up.

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