by Gweall
I loved it, a wonderful tale of deception,unity regardless of physical appearances and of a love lost and then found....just beautiful and touching as usual, wouldn't expect anything else from a great novellist as yourself...Thank you for the story...hope to read more from you soon
u are fabulous...thanks for taking the time...i've always thought that there should be more stories about dragons...they are way more magical nfantastic than vampires or weres...great work...
Gweall, I loved this.. I adore both your dark and sweet story.. Thanks for sharing this
Hehe wow! Terrin is so stubborn xD A great story about bonding friendship, and acceptance. Love it!
That was simply the best! This: "That simple concept that Humanity isn't a species, it's a state of mind." That made my whole damn month.
that was amazing!!!! I loved the story and the whole dragon theme was lovely! This definitely gets 5 stars from me!
The characters were so lovable, especially zan I'd love to read another story with zan and Terran in this world
you never cease to amaze me, even if i haven't commented on any other of your stories, i think it's time to say i really enjoyed this. chu :3
Whew...loved that ending. I love a good tension building story and then throw in some dragons and yes lord. Awesome job! 5 stars.
xoxo
~Night
my god i love this story.
i want to hear more of zan and terrin.
ps. whats with all the spaces in between the words?
seriously in love with this story!
You should defiantly do more I can't get enough! :D
Great work love the dragon/human world ;)
xx
Loved the world you created. Would love to see more. Great job. I truly enjoyed the building of the story. Better then a wham bam thank you mam any day.
xoxo
C.
One of your BEST, possibly THE BEST story you've written. I really enjoyed this. What a great story with an imaginative world and a beautiful tale. I really was drawn into the story. I loved how descriptive it was. It really was wonderful. Keep writing!!!
está tan coól muerooooo!! Kawainess level le over 9000!! Jajaja es bien chevere especialmente que tiene es un final bien y vivieron felices para siempre ;) and then cuando el dice my mate awwwww^^ teehe anyway love it bye
This is thee longest one-shots I've /ever/ read!!!
It is also one of the /BEST/ and most detailed stories I've read so far!!!!
I saw it come up on comments and took a look at which story it was and decided to read it again. I loved this one and was only left with one question....will poor Zan be left alone at the end of Terrin's short life or will his life be extended by being mated to a dragon? Great story. Hope you're well G!
One shot my ass.... Why are you leaving us with so many questions? Is their future bright or is it tragic
Gweall , you are one of my favourite authors on this site and you throw out a quickie story like this , whilst continuing your other main stories. Wow. What an imagination you have. Hats off to you my friend. Keep writing. Just loved this story.
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I wasn't sure what this was going to turn out to be when I started reading it but I couldn't pull myself away and loved every minute of it. Thank you!
It's my second time reading it, and it's just as great as the first. It just draws you in. Now I'm left obsessing over whether other dragons will find their mates in humans, and if they will ever find a way to bring back the nearly extinct clan.
This is probably my third time reading this story and each time is like the first, the characters are so life like (even if some are dragons). I would love to see a second part to this.
Gweall, I have read all your stories on this site. I still think this is one of your best. It always reduces me to tears. No disrespect to your other stories, but this one does it for me. Thank you xxx
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The story was good overall but the formatting could use some work. The dialogue was a bit cheesy at times but generally pretty good. My biggest issue which is just personal preference is that dragons could turn human. I just personally dislike that trope as it makes dragons less special as well as the fact that I find dragons much more attractive then people so I prefer that hot dragon on human action vs the human on human action you chose. But great job nonetheless keep it up.