All Comments on 'The Divine Gambit Ch. 14'

The new information about Evgenia changes a whole lot. That was a great twist, I did not come to that conclusion whatsoever.

When I say that I have been WAITING for this chapter lol. I really enjoy the story and I’m glad to see it being continued. I’ve been checking daily for updates and already can’t wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!

First of all kudos for another great chapter of a universe and characters that I find very interesting.

I think one of the great features of your stories - your empathy describing the characters' motivations - is also something that if unbalanced by other facets - further developing the story, describing more of the world - leaves me wanting at the end of a chapter. Maybe choosing where to break for a chapter or what to include in a chapter differently to even out development of story and characters could be a solution.

This is just a little whining while reading an awesome story though and I can't wait for your next chapter to drop already.

As usual, just enough to leave me frustrated for more. Very much enjoying. Evgenia was a great twist.

Very good, Kemmers, thank you for sharing this story with us.

Yes it was enlightening to hear about Evginia . As the previous chapters heavily dealt with the HUMAN emotions side of an almost real world . Unlike most stories that dive right into the otherworld . This has been a long draw . Very worth it as no stones stay uncovered as they appear . Painstakingly thoroughly explicit in every detail and possible scenario . Slowly incorporating more and more of this otherworld you are building . I love it .

Thank you .

That is a great story looking forward to the new chapters

I’m surprised the dragon didn’t weigh in on the baby making. Either as an accomplishment or a potential weakness to be exposed later. Loved the info in Ev.

Absolutely fascinating, I find myself waiting impatiently for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent.

Ah, no beast inside. There's a novelty at least.