by ShyHottie
"Precum"? Really, dude?
Women don't have "precum"! We get wet. It may be clear and slippery, it may be opaque and thicker, depending on the time of month and other conditions.... Ask a few lesbians before you write again. And drop that word--nobody wants to read that word in a story about women loving women.
Other than that, and some other cluelessness, rather sweet.
there is NO precum and cum in women. your mention of cum and the arrising association with a penis just distroyed my arrousal. bleah
Don't any writers know the difference between "lie" and "lay" and know how to conjugate them??