All Comments on 'The Doctor Will See You Now'

by notalent48

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wrong Category

Not a "loving Wife" story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Ditto

Enough said except 1* and move it somewhere else.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

UTTER GARBAGE!!!!!!Not even worth the 1* I gave it.

BGunnsBGunnsover 9 years ago
Aptly named author.

A very solid one star. Just another cuck story. Needed to rate it so as to warn others.

EgoTrixiEgoTrixiover 9 years ago
Nomen...

...est omen!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hot hot hot!

Funny and sexy too!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
should be in IR as fantasy

wrong category belongs in IR or fetish

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
the only true

about this story is the author name, what a bunch of crap.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Yep, No Talent...

Just a typical sicko author pretending to be able to write an erotic story. Big, big difference between erotic and "dirty." Most LW stories are just plain "dirty," as is this piece of trash.

threeinchthreeinchover 9 years ago
She deserves a real cock

All Wives deserve a real cock, if Her husband's tiny thing is inadequate the husband must accept Her satisfaction by a real man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
so this is sexy?

hell make it really sexy

have her castrate pussy boy by pulling them off

then too really show love have them cut off his dick and let him bleed out

no anybody that likes this crape needs to get help

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Pointless

How is it that all these writers write about guys that are wimps and take this shit from their wives or girlfriends. Are their no more real men to write about.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Dictatorship supporter

@ threeinch Is it obligatory to live together in marriage according to you? The tiny cock husdband MUST NOT divorce according to you. Would you ban the divorce if you were dictator in a dictatorship? In the Nazi Germany Himmler planned to ban the divorce!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
wrong setting dude

this is Bondage setting not wiffie setting pure and simple.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
yikes.

I am sure no talent that wrote this has a tiny cock.but that makes this pathic not erotic, creepy perverts on here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
1*

New daily baboon ..........

swingerjoeswingerjoeover 9 years ago
Why?

Why on earth did you put this story in this section? Do you like the abuse? Oh, wait.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
no talent

fitting name

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
gee the dr is out now

You ask what happened. He tried the same shit on a different couple. seems when he left the 5th floor window. That he wasn't superman after all and really couldn't fly. When his 4 ft tall body was viewed in his coffin. Yeah Hitting head first does tend to knowck off a ft or so of height. It was determined he committed suicide to keep from getting thrown in jail for rape and other charges. And you ask what drove him to take a leap out his 5th floor window. Well that scrawny lil white guy tossed his ass through it when he suggested he watch him fuck his wife. as for her She is very happy with her white husbands 5 inch cock and his 12 inch didlo. Seems as if the good Dr wasn't cut out to treat white folks after all. Oh well he did have a nice funeral although only his mother showed up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Fantastic! We have another sicko who gets off on humiliation. Yay for more fucked up sickos!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
WTF

Which I could give this a 0

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wrong category

Should be fetish.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Another stupid story!

Aren't there ANY normal authors out there?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Truthful at least

Your "nom de plume" is in fact, highly accurate....you definitely have NO TALENT. Perhaps you could come up with something vaguely resembling a story before demonstrating your lack of talent in future

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
too silly to be

Not LW

Not Romance

Not erotic anything

closest category would be BDSM with a splash of IR and humiliation thrown in.

this may be an attempt to get the lowest overall score of all time.

should have stopped when I saw the authors user name.

MrReasonableMrReasonableover 9 years ago
not even believable

even if you are dumb and stoned

OOAAOOAAover 9 years ago
Good story!!!!

Maybe in fetish or BSDM better than Loving Wives category, but excellent story! ;)

impo_58impo_58over 9 years ago
Why?

Why did she need a doctor to tell her things, when she already had the husband caged? So this story looses all the line-up...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
no talent

a fitting name

devilspydevilspyover 9 years ago
Cuckold

Should have made cuckold suck the Dr's cock, then help put his cock in his wife's tight married pussy. Then clean cock and her pussy. Then maybe make cuckold suck his cock and swallow the second load.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Then Hubby filed the lawsuit

And for a divorce. Because who would stay with a complete and utter bitch that spends her time humiliating you? It makes no sense. Awful story of abuse.

tazz317tazz317about 8 years ago
YOU CANT GO ANY LOWER THAN WHALE SHIT

and hubby did and does. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
please don't write anymore

You have no talent. Don't waste our time with your dribble.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Pure Shit

The header says it all.

Mauser45Mauser45over 5 years ago
'No talent' is right

Wimps and cuckolds deserve nothing but pain and heartache. Whores they married deserve to be burned. In this case, there was no burning. Cuckold stories are sick. 1*

26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

Pen name is perfect description of this cuck fool’s writing ability.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Justice

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fuck that doc

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Would have been nice to also give the pet an injection to keep him compliant. Injections turn me on.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Really, no Talent at all! For you writing means the same as shitting!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

THE IDEA OF A MAN PET- SUBSERVIANT. PREFER STORY WITH WILLING AND ABLE WILLING MAKE KNOWING HE'S EVENTUALLY GOING TO HAVE HIS PENIS TAKEN FROM HIM

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