All Comments on 'The Dog Park'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Ooh that was inspiring. So visual, so perfect. Thank you thank you.

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slavejasperslavejasperalmost 11 years ago

Such a perfect little story, I loved every syllable of it. Can't wait to read more from you, you have this boy in the palm of your hands.

slave2womanslave2womanalmost 11 years ago
perfect story

i'm generally not in pet-stories, but this story is somehow different, i loved the fact that slaves are registered as live stock, as well as the pets are more treated as slaves than as dogs, the dog park is more like a slave park where their animal slave instincts are guided under supervision, really wonderful story, hope to read sequels ...

mel_pomenemel_pomenealmost 11 years ago
A fascinating premise ...

... and a well-written story. This, I have to admit, is not my favourite niche - I like the FemDom aspect of it but I've never been much into pet-play. Many are, of course, and it is never sensible to trash someone else's - specialisms.

Will there be any more of it to follow? I think I would like to read more - thank you for sharing your talent with us.

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