by Kent100
very nice story. the boy paid for his crime and learned about the joy of sex as well. i'd like to see his continued education.
I just re-read my own story...that I proofed at least 3 times before submitting...and I see so many grammatical errors...I apologize...if I submit another story...I will try harder on the proofing...Kent100
Good story, while I do not usually like forced sex stories I found this one to be good. I really liked that you gave us a good introduction. I would like to see more chapters. Hopefully they will put Tommy's ass in jail and continue to teach Mark the joys of gay sex because it sounds like he is a natural at it.
No need to be sorry for the few mistakes, a lot of stories have a lot more than you did. Some have so many that they are hard to read, some have been so bad that I just stopped reading them.
Really enjoyed this, not sure why it doesn't hit the Hot rating but I guess you just can't please all of the people all of the time.
It was ok.. to much beating on the kid for me..no pleasure in extreme brutal pain.. not necessary or needed,