All Comments on 'The Dollmaker's Playlist'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Just make stories longer..love the writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I love those short but sexy stories. That was excellent.

SomaSlaveSomaSlaveabout 1 year ago

Nicely written; second person is hard to pull off. In a short like this, it works. I liked the use of playlists as triggers and reinforcement.

AlexiaAlexanderAlexiaAlexanderabout 1 year ago

The words Good Doll filled me with such peace.

oldtwitoldtwitabout 1 year ago

Oh that was a good read, for me the third person is harder to get into but good plot idea

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Always classy.

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At last we begin, and from the smallest of things: a mistake. Cassie asked for the free will to make her own choice at the end of Wonderland, but she did something unexpected. Instead of keeping free will for herself, she gave it to her nemesis, Lily. Now Lily is free to wand...