by Iwroteathing
Absolutely loved the story but would have preferred a different ending one that ended with Ron going to prison on assorted charges. I had a very sick feeling when the turd showed up at the hotel
Its people (m&f) like him that negate the belief in a benevolent god.
Tess (uk)
"then Max encountered another dog sitter and stopped to have a quick chat while the dogs socialised around Tarsa's feet."
Don't you think this deserved more coverage? She's standing there, exposed as some other person is chatting with Max and doubtless appraising her.
I wonder where do you get these ideas from. ;)
Funny and bold, certainly, but I'd give you a pair of advises. First, this needs a sequel. Second, you've spent too much time to reach the fun parts (which is fine if that's what you wanted).
Thank you again, and you have me sans doubt waiting for the next story.
-Onkana
I really liked this idea. It leaves me wanting to know more about both the hardware and also about Tarsa's kinky games.
Tarsa Is My Hero! She and Hilda Did Great BDSM Tricks With No Dark Secrets! More Stories, Including Louise' Kennels Would Be Great! Loved Your Plot!
Fantastic concept and story
Love everything about it, it is perfect as is!
A sequel is always welcome of course
Or maybe another quality story (possibly within the same "universe")
Love it! Let me know if you want one made, I do that sort of development.
This was an excellent story, well-written, well-paced, and while not out-and-out sex it's hot as all fuck. Well done!