All Comments on 'The Domme Next Door Pt. 02'

Hmmm, any chance of Bill undergoing a more formal physical where Doctor Alison decides to blend his knock-out kink with a "flu shot" or "a little bit of oxygen?" There's something about those fleece-padded medical restraints. >.>

Thank you , such a lovely story!

5 stars

This is so realistic and well written. After part 3 at Allison's house, given the plot foreshadowing, please circle back on Samantha, Betty and the Femdom Club. The only suggestion is consider describing the women to create a visual and make sure Bill never has to guess about who is in charge. Strict, mean and lovingly cruel is always good in this category!

Keep going. You truly are a very good writer.

Well done! Can’t wait for part 3.

I may be in his place someday and it would be a dream come true to find a Mistress like this to serve

You did such a good lead up to this point can’t wait for the next chapter to arrive. Please continue