All Comments on 'The Door'

Very hot story, although I would have liked a little more imagery regarding surroundings, clothing, etc... You write action very well, but I think setting is also quite important. Take it or leave it, I enjoyed your story nonetheless. Thanks and keep up the good work.

m.

Wow. You captured it perfectly. Thank you for a most arousing story. For me there is nothing more erotic than a woman wanting to expose herself and ultimately masturbate in front of others. You told the story of my deepest heartfelt fantasy. Thank you Claudia!

You must continue this story, this is a great start but if must it must continue

The ultimate hook to this story is that the reader so wants it to be true but does not believe it could be. Women are not that lewd keeps running through their mind, they are not that bold. Oh, so how untrue. Having witnessed episodes like this with two different women, I say right on Claudia, tell us the rest of the story, make us believe this woman is too good to be true.

John C. aka tell_redshoe

The ultimate hook to this story is that the reader so wants it to be true but does not believe it could be. Women are not that lewd keeps running through their mind, they are not that bold. Oh, so how untrue. Having witnessed episodes like this with two different women, I say right on Claudia, tell us the rest of the story, make us believe this woman is too good to be true.

John C. aka tell_redshoe

... much ado about nowt.

Stan