All Comments on 'The Dragon Chief'

by Alpanu

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FromTxFromTxover 3 years ago
Excellent start

Short but great set up. Hope you continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Cautiously optimistic

It definitely sounds interesting but I have huge issues with non consent and being trapped but that’s my problem not yours.

Human beings don’t respond well to captivity a lot of people seem to forget that. A few things can happen when you’ve been enslaved, acceptance, despair, faux acceptance until escaping is possible, sometimes though if escape or rescue proves to be impossible there are a lot of people who would rather kill themselves than endure misery it’s not an easy thing to do but it’s preferable to being used.

I’m going to give it a shot because your story does sound interesting, not the almost inevitable rapes but the storyline itself. I’m just hoping you don’t make the mistake of calling it BDSM, she isn’t in a position to give free fully informed consent.

Thanks for sharing.

Tess (UK)

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