All Comments on 'The Dream'

by Gretatv

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msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
Written Well, but...

... there were a couple a couple of typos.Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
A lovely way to start a good marrriage!

Greta, you are really creative in your stories, and such a fine writer the way you bring your readers straight into the intimacy of your bridal suite! You are really a fine one when it comes to details and visual descriptions!

Keep writing...

(Mrs.) S L

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Interesting

but why would he stay with her? She admitted that she only married him for his money and she has to stay 5 years with him. I can see an anullment/divorce the next day.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I have been married 5 years and am still technicaly a virgin. my wife cockolded me in much the same manner on my honeymoon night. I have been taken as a girl but never as a man. She locked me up and the only time my cocket is free is when I am at the doctors office. She is with me and locks me back up as soon as we get to the car so I have not even jacked off. She knew how much I jacked off because she helped me do it up to 10 times one day. usualy 5 or 6 times but ever day up till the time we walked down the aisle then twice in the limo. That was the last time I actualy climaxed. 5 years of hell watching her fuck and nothing for my cocket

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