All Comments on 'The Dream Ch. 03'

Of course this chapter is amazing. 5 stars from me as Skye delivers her writing in such a way where you can feel the conversations and not just read them...kisses...Britt

I agree with Britt - 5 stars. But I'm worried. Worried for Jodie and worried for Skye. Has Greg done something to Jodie? If so, how will Skye react? Will she try to do something to Greg? Will she do something to Greg? I hope it all works out well for both of them! And now a word from our sponsor. No, sorry, just kidding! This does seem somewhat like a soap opera, but I think it is more serious than that. What I actually want to get to is the word "discrete" used in reference to the encounter in the restroom in the pub. I think the word you wanted was "discreet". I suggest you Google "discrete or discreet" to get an explanation of the difference between the two words. And, on a final note, I again agree with Britt that you write very well, the use of "discrete" notwithstanding! Looking forward to more of this story.

We were expecting trouble at home with Logan, not trouble for Jodie. This is really coming together quite well. Even though we "knew" there was going to be trouble for Jodie at home, we hoped . . . we still hope . . . it just might not be so easy . . .

Definitely 5 stars!!

I know real life keeps ya busy but I'll be biting my nails until the next chapter. Really really good job on this one!

now this is a good chapter I hope it goes on like this without everything that happened in ch 2

To good to leave as is

Pls continue am very desperate that i can't wait to know wat happen next