All Comments on 'The Dream Job'

by ShelbyDawn57

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
GREAT STORY

Loved the writing. Elaine looks like she has the world to herself.Cant wait for part 2.

EnjoyBothEnjoyBothalmost 4 years ago
Loved It

I enjoyed reading this story. You had me. Looking forward to more. After rereading your bio, I love how you've tied your life into your character in this story. Am a fan and again, looking for more from you here soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Seems familiar

This seems to be a more sinister version of Molly's Game with the benefit of erotica.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Loved it!

Wonderful writing with intriguing characters and it has a great turn or two. I enjoyed it from beginning to end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Happy Endings

The last paragraph was a Happy Ending and there were lots of happy endings throughout the tale. A little unbelievable but everything we like to read in this sector

Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story loved it kind of hoping there is a part two

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Absolutely loved the story, as with all your stories . Can’t wait for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You are an incredible writer, Thank you for sharing

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 1 year ago

Elaine has been through some hard times painful moments to become a pain loving whore ...... It's sounds like a normal work path for a whore ..... Interesting story, but im sure I don't wanna ever have an FBI Agent sitting at a dinner table close to me showing his badge talking business

Freebird6996Freebird6996over 1 year ago

Different, but still intoxicating...

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Authors Notes: Lots going on right now. Wanted to give everyone a big heads up. The authors got together and challenged each other to write stories in exactly 750 words. Never one to back down from a fight, I wrote and submitted six. They span several categories; 2 Sci-Fi/Fa...