by ShelbyDawn57
Loved the writing. Elaine looks like she has the world to herself.Cant wait for part 2.
I enjoyed reading this story. You had me. Looking forward to more. After rereading your bio, I love how you've tied your life into your character in this story. Am a fan and again, looking for more from you here soon.
This seems to be a more sinister version of Molly's Game with the benefit of erotica.
Wonderful writing with intriguing characters and it has a great turn or two. I enjoyed it from beginning to end.
The last paragraph was a Happy Ending and there were lots of happy endings throughout the tale. A little unbelievable but everything we like to read in this sector
Keep up the good work
Absolutely loved the story, as with all your stories . Can’t wait for the next one.
Elaine has been through some hard times painful moments to become a pain loving whore ...... It's sounds like a normal work path for a whore ..... Interesting story, but im sure I don't wanna ever have an FBI Agent sitting at a dinner table close to me showing his badge talking business