All Comments on 'The Dream Never Dared Ch. 01'

I think it would be a great chapter if he does get to make love to his mother. Fuck her all weekend long until they both are certain that they belong together as sexual lovers and become soul mates. Thanks

"...snatched from this orb before his appointed time"? If you would write more like you speak your work would be less tedious and more fluid. (If you speak like this, you probably get the shit kicked out of you three times a week.) And we have appointed times, do we? More honest, less prosaic. I had to quit after the second screen, you irritated me so.

you tell about your mom body and do everything but fuck her.teasing crap sucks.all of a sudden you get morals bullshit.

I hope that they end up together.

incest story is finally going to become just that. IT'S TIME TO GET TO IT!!!!

it should be called "Ch. 02" but its a pretty good story

hot

As others have said nice start! Now it's tme for the band to play and the final act to take place!!

Thanks for writing!

sexmate

ok it is all set now please continue with chapter 2. Anxious to read it!