All Comments on 'The Dream Never Dared Ch. 01'

Good start, but wrong category, unless you are putting all chapter parts in the same category because incest will dominate the story in general. Definitely want to see what Jerry was doing and have him get in on the action. Please continue. :)

I hope that I get to read of a lot more of their sexual couplings that they have as their love and sexual affair grows to the point where there isn't any awkward moments with them and the true love and need to be sexual with each other is the only feelings that they share.This is just a very sweet and sexual story. Thanks

I just wish you were a bit more descriptive when it came to the sex. There didn't seem to be any transition between different sex acts. It almost felt the same as watching some porn movie clips, instead of an entire scene. Otherwise, I really liked it, and would love to read Ch. 2.

it's just an erotic coupling

It truly was a sweet sexual story. I look forward to reading other chapters from you. Thanks for a great submission.