All Comments on 'The Drive-In Pt. 01'

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avengilineavengilineover 2 years ago

That was genuinely cute!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice premise.

Well told story.

Would have liked a little reluctance, less self-assuredness. Would have liked slower moving along with the sex.

Nevertheless, five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

nicely written

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice story. It makes a good start for a follow on. This one could have used just a little more tentativeness as they explored and perhaps develop the feelings they were going through a little more. It would have helped to hear more of her backstory

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The Drive-in part is very similar to my own experience. Cumming in a car at the Drive-in is messy. I shot my load every where. She did not laugh at the time. We had “white coats”, employees that patrolled up and down the rows of cars during the movies. They would check on your car if it was rocking to much. I was the ONLY kid to own a station wagon in high school. The front seats also reclined. I always kept two blankets in the back “just in case it got cold”. First time sex stories seem to always improve over the years.

Crusader235Crusader235over 2 years ago

Ahh, the good ole days. Very well done, good memories of drive-ins'. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well told!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Keep writing, you have a good thing going, tell us about the rest of the Summer!!!

Cal59Cal59over 2 years ago

Excellent, thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good premise.

But really lacks details.

Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Reminds me of the best summer of my life.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Your story was great. Some (actually most) of the stories on here, in my opinion, are a little to sexually detailed. I think that takes away from the story. Some detail is great. That is what most of us read them for. But too much is too much. Yours were just right. I've read three of them and they were all good. I noticed that one of the comments said just the opposite. Don't listen to him. Keep up the good work.

Thank you

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Just a guy getting some of these erotic stories out on "paper". I find it cathartic and I obsess less about them knowing they're "out there". Some are based on my personal experiences, some are just made up. Just a bit of fun- enjoy.

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