All Comments on 'The Drive-In Pt. 04'

Very well written. A perfect ending. I was hoping for it. You didn't disappoint.

I'd give six stars if I could, to balance out the four I gave part three due to its lack of a satisfying ending. Your reply to my comment there seemed to suggest you were irked that I didn't realize more was coming, but when you say "I hoped you enjoyed this series" (as you did again here), it implies that there's no more to come, despite your question mark at the end of "The End." In any case, I look forward to more stories from you -- Dave K.

Hey, Dave. Part 3 ended like it did for dramatic reasons. Gotta have the audience wanting more. No offense and thanks for the kind words. This was the easiest story I’ve written so far, kinda wrote itself.

Fantastic set of stories, so happy I stumbled across.. One of the best I had a pleasure to read!

Thank you for such an uplifting story on an otherwise busy afternoon. Your story brought back such memories of young love.

Excellent story. I was a little surprised how quickly they grew apart, but under the circumstances, in the context, it's possible. Well done.

fun & sexy - managed a drive in in 1960, it did open opportunities. drove PCH & Malibu Canyon every morning for a couple years, in the early morning you would see small clouds forming & dissipating in the ravines. I have a woman that I've loved for over 40 years, we're bi-coastal now but talk often. I could feel a connection as well as enjoy your story

definitely keep writing more