All Comments on 'The Dutiful Son'

Good god please nake a part 2!

Will do! Thank you for reading and weighing in.

Was going to be 4 ⭐️ /5⭐️ story until you brought Beverly into force a blackmail scandal. Then it dropped automatically to a 2⭐️ for me

Brother and sister = “identical” twins? Let the class see your math work on that one.

Otherwise, well enough done.

You were a "5" until your ending . Now a 2.

Well thanks for letting me know. All feedback is good.

Ah good catch. By “identical” I mean they shared the same amniotic sac. Thanks for correcting me on that. I’ve had two commenters now to tell me that the story was a five and then became a two at the end. I know why one person felt that way but I’m curious to know if the other commenter had the same issue with the “blackmail” portion. Thanks

Sexy and intriguing. This story can go several ways. Cant wait to see where you take it. Don’t worry about the haters. Be a duck and keep on trucking

HOG57head, thank you for the kind words. I’m going to be checking your works out as well!

Its a good premise, my only issue is that you build up to intimate scenes between characters then sprint to the next one without fleshing out each scene. Its supposed to be “erotica” not the mentioning of sex and then move on.

I’m not quite certain of what you mean by that. Would you mind providing an example? Thanks. And thanks for the feedback.

The most intriguing and suspenseful kind of stories are those that center on mother-son love.

Thank you so much Kimo23. I just uploaded part 2. 12-28-2022

Liked this a lot but you quit to soon what happened to Spencer gave it a 4 cause you stopped!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks so much. Please check out part two which has been uploaded. Spencer’s story continues there.