All Comments on 'The Dyke and the Bridesmaid'

I get Leah is a first-timer to a lesbian bar. TJ calls her ex a bitch for telling her to lose weight, but Leah, who one would assume is hetero, doesn't correct her that the ex was a guy. So has Leah been closeted? Glad she has courage though to share her Snapchat with TJ, a real smoothie..

Nice start. Want to see how it grows

Great, look forward to it continuing.

What a great start to a story!

Cant wait to read a continuation

Very poorly written. Definitely needs to be edited before submission. Missing punctuation, mixed tense. I couldn't continue reading after 3 minutes. Sorry.