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by sexyvijaya

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misterwhomisterwhoover 17 years ago
Lots of build up

Your stories lay out the canvas so well, and the buildup is powerful too. you have two choices thereafter: either take it the whole distance and describe the lovemaking in erotic detail. or in romantic tones. Dont stop where you do.

BandraBandraover 17 years ago
It's hard

Another excellent story. Keep up the good work. It's hard.

Bandra

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