All Comments on 'The Eden Protocols Pt. 01'

Interesting.

Fuck! I'm totally on board! This is going to be fun!

Similar vibe to Artemis by Quixerotic1, which is Hucow, whereas this is obviously going down the Bimbo path

I love it

Thank you, Dearest Readers for all the awesome feedback and encouragement! Part two is locked and loaded to come out this weekend as I commence writing part three for your erudite enjoyment. It's over the top, and a bit silly but I hope you fine folks will like it.

Writing is very good and the premise is interesting. Some of the descriptions are a little too wordy but a great start.

Hmm. No offense but I don't think "triage" means what you think it means. It's the allocation of health care, deciding who will be ignored, despite their need for care.