All Comments on 'The Edging'

by Gloriouswoman67

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AlexiaAlexanderAlexiaAlexander4 months ago

The only thing that would make this better would be that she didn't stop edging so soon. Very lovely tale.

muskyboymuskyboy4 months ago

Needed some dialogue, even with herself.

Codoc24Codoc244 months ago

Should have edged herself longer. It was a little jarring when it ended so abruptly.

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