All Comments on 'The Education of Lana Owens'

Interesting story!

5

Fun characters, in a story told in a very engaging style. Nice work!

I've been playing with my cock of course while reading.

Hope to see more of you.

Cheers

2We

I gave five stars, but in about the third and fourth pages there were a couple of typos. You even changed David's surname from Stein to the same as George's. The writing was excellent, and I know proof reading your own work is hard. You might want to seek a third party for editing. Just a thought. Excellent though, and worthy of the five stars I gave it.

Thank you, Boyd, Scruffy, Anon, and LeBaron for your kind and generous comments! I love getting feedback and enjoyed reading them. I know this is one of my longer stories, and thanks too for having read the whole thing. Stay healthy, and Happy Thanksgiving, JB

Great story of a single human seeking their own sexuality, I liked the feeling of when I first found my own sexuality. It was simply a good fuck story, for ALL!

Humorous as well as sexy. A great Holiday Story. I don't know how Lana remained a virgin for so long with all of the blow jobs, and anal sex she engaged in. But that's neither here nor there. This is a fun story that I enjoyed immensely. 5 Stars.

I am so looking forward to reading about Lana's further encounters in Sin Sin nati. Great job keeping my interest

A very sweet story from a different perspective. 5 stars for the entertainment - thanks.

Loved the references to Cincinnati where I grew up. Hope to read chapter 2 soon.

Fabulous story! I loved it! Five stars! I wish I could have given it more - 10 at least - and maybe 100. But help me out. Who's Lana Turner?

Wow! I loved the way you built the suspense around George and his desire to fuck you. The lesbian scenes you describe are out of this world. Would love to watch women in the throes of sexual bliss that you describe. I am SO horney now!!!!

5 stars

It was a long story, but some people tend to like that on this site.

Well written. Wasn't sure at all what was going to happen and the start was slow then the pace quickened. Very readable. Enjoyed it thoroughly.

Lana was a quick study and quickly got in the swing of things, you might say. Early on, I liked Lana's dialogue with her Jewish mother. I don't have a Jewish mother but I've watched plenty of them in action. I heard Barbara Streisand's voice in Funny Girl in some of the dialogue. I couldn't predict how the story would end and that's good. 5*

Excellent