All Comments on 'The Effable Joy of Nudity Pt. 05'

I know you said this was going to be disjointed, but the plotting here left me a bit unsatisfied. When did the Institute start? Was this Joy of Nudity thing already normalized by the time the protagonist arrived? The first story claimed it was her legacy, but based on what's said here, it seems like it was already brewing without her. When did her opinions on nudity evolve? There's more information given here about the protagonist's present feelings than her feelings at the time.

I hope the next chapter clears all this up.

I, for one, don't mind the exposition or philosophising at all!

No, l didn’t like this, it had an underlying thread of politics to it. A fanaticism being engended regards compulsory nudism for women, being pushed by other women in positions of authority.

It left a bad taste in my mouth.

Scores 2/5 as a result.

This was a better chapter compared to the previous one. Jack was a creep.