All Comments on 'The Effable Joy of Nudity Pt. 07'

Kind of just wanders.

More showing and less telling, if you please. As you said, it is getting rather palaverous.

Fair enough. This will be my last story.

Sarobah I encourage you not to stop writing because of negative comment. If possible review critiques and choose to agree or not, but honor your urge to write and keep going. Practice, learn and grow. It is worth it, trust me.

please don't let this be your last. I'm really enjoying your style.