All Comments on 'The Elephant & The Song'

I liked this. Wish it was longer. The ending seemed quick. Not much more to say, but I am glad she found someone "safe" and he found someone to love.

Thank you for writing, I enjoyed reading this.

Touching tale. Good message unfolded well. Bit of a rushed ending but you hit all the important points of your story. Well done.

It's a shame that some guys take advantage of women for their own selfish reasons. At least this story ended on an upbeat note.

I agree with the first two commenters--the end seemed somewhat rushed. I'd have preferred to read more about Liz and Todd's romantic, erotic encounters, but all's well that ends well.

Thanks for posting. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

There is a whole possible world mutual masterbation for the first-time couple.

I feel that you could have done more. I remember fondly my lady’s first hand-jobs :)

Very good and it's wonderful to read that they stayed together. Like others, there seems to be a missing part at the end; after all of the details to get there, the ending leaves us wanting more, almost incomplete... I thank you for sharing your story with us!

So the dumbass that left the comment that they would like to read more of liz and Todd's romantic encounters didn't read that part to well. Todd basically got her drunk and fucked her then proceeded to gang rape her with his two asshole friends. Todd is the bad guy of the story and the cause of Liz's issue with trusting any man. I wish the writer kinda gave some justice for Liz by having Todd and his rape buddies get arrested for rape and spend 20 years get ass fucked in prison the entire time. Overall decent story but wish that you had to be so graphic with Liz's back story.

i love it everytime i read it

its so easy to defile a woman to break her into pieces almost any man can do that to any woman but its only a real man who listens who understand her pain ,patiently taking the pieces of her broken heart to make into one single unit again and lock himself in her

i wish i was there for her telling her it was not her fault to trust and fall for todd men like todd are heartless predators who might sell their own daughters amd sisters he wasnt looking for love but rather a reluctant naive virgin molded into his sexslave

bless keri every girl needs a friend like her and every girl needs a kent (not the fake nice ones) the one and only nice inside and out no deceptions no mind game pure honesty and pure ectasy

beautiful as always 5 stars