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by Chapterfive

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
good first piece

Great, let's see some more of your work!

Nice, thoughtful, but I could see the end coming, perhaps because it started with "yours" in the frst paragraph rather than a more oblique reference to the guy.

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