All Comments on 'The Empress' New Clothes'

by HeyYoureThatGuy

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MimiRayMimiRayover 3 years ago

I sure hope there's a part 2!

SweetAnnetteSweetAnnetteover 3 years ago
Very hot

That's been a fantasy of mine for a long time- the naked hostess!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
My God man

Thanks a lot , you’ve got me running around naked and introducing myself to all my neighbors ! But to no avail , I’ve been slapped , slammed , laughed at and beaten up ! The only time I got any penetration was when the people at the end of the block penetrated my gluteus Maximus with rock salt via 12 gauge ! Oh well , maybe I’ll have better luck down the next block ! Lol ! loved your story ! Sinkill and Esquirt gives it two cocks up , way up !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
love it!

What a great story! So much fun and so hot. Thanks a lot.

PMDlitePMDliteover 3 years ago
Well told!

A nice Summer story! Deserves a sequel!

Underdog_13Underdog_13over 3 years ago

Another great story. Thanks!

centauri4centauri4over 3 years ago

Solid plot and nicely paced details. Could easily be any one of our neighbors' fantasy as well, I hope!

GaminaGaminaover 3 years ago
Very good story/pacing

Love it and hope to see a sequel! Easy 5 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Deserve second part

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Son ofa beech!

This story has HOT built in! Great start to a series.

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4ualmost 3 years ago

I think we all have a little voyeur / exhibitionist in us, Melonie got to let hers out. Nicely paced voyage of discovery with great characters. Yes please another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Please give us more!

zooliciouszooliciousalmost 2 years ago

Really fun story. Lets party on the beach next.

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I came here to do low-stakes writing, just for fun as opposed to my 'professional' work, which is far less fun. I like to write, but I have dyslexia—a word I still have to look up every time I need to spell it. There, but for the grace of editors, go I.