All Comments on 'The Empty Seat'

Spectacular. English major or not, virtually flawless. Good back stories. Great concert ambience. Good plot development, if not surprising. And all characters come across as real people. Thanks. A real pleasure to read.

A beautifully executed sweet love story. Great work. Thank you

fukn good $$$$#%%

Five stars, I felt that I was getting to know them , well written and delightful.

Great story. Two edits to consider:

1. In the first part, Jorfsn is a lawyer. Yet he only earns a BA and MBA.

2. Witnesses to a Ketubah must not be blood relatives of either the bride or groom.

Small stuff, but distracting. Loved the story.

Very enjoyable story!

5

Enjoyed the story, but the sex was weak

Contrary to BP, I think the sex dominated the story early in their relationship. Thoughts of whether they were in love versus lust should have come up at that point, but didn't. Jordan should have had some thoughts of whether his wealth influenced her attraction as well, so a couple small plot misses. Otherwise, great story and very well written. The back half was especially strong - 4.8*

Got about halfway through the first page and couldn't get any further. The writing was that bad. No one speaks that way in real life. It sounded so mechanical, boring. I don't know how everyone has been able to read it and give it so many stars. 1*

The story has some problems, but I still gave it a 5 because its a hairy pussy story and that is the tag I searched.

Beautiful story.

Some weaknesses in the story and some obvious typos including at least one erroneous name. A good storyline but as others said I think they moved into sex too easily and little was made of their insecurities especially Jordan being concerned about gold diggers. Despite that, an enjoyable read.

What a nice love story! It was nice to read that she has a hairy pussy. Little girls have bare pussies, women have hair!