All Comments on 'The Enchanted Rider Ch. 02'

I really look forward to seeing where this story goes such a good stage with so many possibilities, don't keep us waiting too long.

This could be a great yarn!

So have you run out of ideas, or lost interest?

Good story. Obviously Lady C. will make an appearance. I look forward to that.

Good Start. You have several possible storylines that can easily open up and give us a great series, if you want to keep writing, or you can kill everyone off by an easy betrayal, to end the set. It is up to you. I personally hope that you keep going... what a great beginning, with such deep characters!

Keep going and do NOT bring anyone else in.