by EtherealBeauty
Excellent writing that holds your attention from beginning to end. By end, I mean the end of this chapter as I presume that there will be much more to come as her desire to exact revenge is yet to be fulfilled. While there is some eroticism, it is not a stroke story per se even though the basis of her power is sexually fed through her enchantments. Definitely will be looking for more in the near future!
Ahh thanks so much, appreciate all the feedbacks. If you have any request on how the story progressed, or some new ideas about the story, please leave a comment and I'll consider it :)
Have to admit I'm not usually a femdom fan, but this was so erotic. It was really interesting.
Great! Hope to see more stories from you.. a suggestion? Make her conquer the outside world too, starting from this little loyal army she created and enslaving more men, and getting revenge on the ones that put her in jail.
Loved it! A little more resistance on the men's part would be nice if I had to choose. But that's just my liking. I love when they try and hold back but simply can't due to her hotness. Great job.