All Comments on 'The End of Evil Ch. 05'

Awesome story :)

I admire the sense of reality you achieve in this story. This time it was nagging emotions that could have come from a number of places. It would have been very easy to identify one in particular, but life isn't like that. The shifting dynamics among the characters is such an authentic aspect of human relationships.

I continue to enjoy your work very much.

GE

I have been following your story and I must say you are so talented. I can't get enough its almost as if I can feel what there going through with them. Again thankyou...

Now you made hate both bob and Donna. Both are selfish. She needs better. Wrong timing for them both to just "play" at being good dominants. Sorry now I rooting for junie to get the heck out.

Let bob and donna have each other... maybe its time JUNIE find her self a new dom because as bob has said he would end this triangle if it became too much for his relationship with donna... and he already made one hell of a mistake by telling poor JUNIE I don't care... my heart broke.... please help JUNIE

This whole story is like a roller coaster ride... I love it.....

Bob is a pretend (not pretentious) know-it-all ass. Donna is cruel to and jealous of Junie and doesn't appear to care how her mood shifts affect Junie. And Junie is a tiresome needy whiner. She does not seem to have many--if any--ah ha moments to show she has learned something. Every chapter is the same blathering. The few snippets about the trial are interesting but there are not enough of them to hold my interest. -- shemar