All Comments on 'The End of Evil Ch.14'

That was Awsome but come on please don't leave us hanging for to long

You've done it again. Another fantastic chapter but I am left wanting, please don't keep us waiting long the suspense is killing me!

Thanks for a great story.

I like the way you handled this part of the story. The image of Dominant Bob stalking the villain with his high powered bow really appeals to me. Talk about macho!

I also liked the sense that Junie has grown so much through her relationship with Bob and Donna that she is able to fight for herself and those depending on her.

Good all the way around.