All Comments on 'The End of High School'

Nice little story. I could almost hear the conversation between mother and daughter.

Except that my two go a lot further than that, although I suppose that it is because they know I do not disapprove that they go the whole way.

Either I don't really understand the definition of incest, or I really did miss something? I like your writing style, but you need to add some chapters to this one.

i really like your style, and this story looks like it's going the right direction. it just needs to be finished...

Again, NOBODY committed INCEST!

I just found these stories by a chance comment on the feedback page. I knew it had a point. This feels like a promising start I dont know whx some have doubts about the incest aspect its only the first ch. give it time. Thanks. -- UK CYNIC.

This was a good story. Can't wait to read the rest of it.

and no punchline, no nothing except a damp little flatulent noise as my interest-level imploded and shot out the window. No stars, must try harder