All Comments on 'The Equilibrium Deviance Ch. 00'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Hmmm

This feels cut off at a way to weird a place that it must be some kind of error. Even though its a 00 chapter, I just doubt that was the author's intention to end it right there so abruptly. Other than that, it starts really well. Betting that the mystery goddess is Circe, and I hope it is.

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