All Comments on 'The Escalation'

I guess I should have put at the top that this was a submission for April Fools Day Contest 2022. Hopefully it stands on its own as well.

Bwahaha! This was great! Really fun, imaginative and well written. Thanks!

Great story, loved it.

ah no it doesn't stand on it's own........... stupid

Good story. I'm not into transvestitism and transgender stories, but as it was only a small part of the total, it wasn't bothersome.

Pedantic correction: Trans female is technically post-gender-reassignment surgery. Until then, the individual is still transitioning.

Insane Science Denier things biology is whatever you want it to be.

No

Anon: as a trans woman, it's frankly insulting to hear such rhetoric, there is no one "right way" to be trans, and your "pedantry" is just wrong, and I literally am posting the first comment I've ever posted because of this

To the author: Very hot~ Very much enjoyed it~

Well, I really liked the unique concept and storytelling from the different points of view. It would have been better if Jake drove all the way and then found Candice and Phil together in bed (just themselves). However, another story with someone with a 10 inch cock? Oh well, still a good story and glad that it did not get anyone hurt (well, maybe Jake will know that he almost took this prank way too far). Maybe next prank will have Phil have Jake's wife kidnapped by some rough looking thugs but, of course, nothing really happens to her. Right?

I loved it.

Well that was unexpected…

I guess it's fitting that April Fool's is a trick on the reader, but would be nice to keep the gay stories in the gay category.