All Comments on 'The Escort'

by MissSenses

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Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 16 years ago
Quite delicious, MissSenses

OK, I could niggle a wee bit. But I'm not going to. Your command of language is superb, and the strangeness of the story utterly convincing. And your fine treatment of the developing relationship is wonderful; your sex-description devoid of awful overused cliches, and all the hotter for it. It really worked for me, Miss!

badfish07badfish07almost 16 years ago
Wow! Very steamy

MissSenses you have a way of making the reader feel every tingle. Superb!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Fabulous!

This story was hot! With your superb literary skills, the reader can actually picture everything that is happening.

walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 15 years ago
Great Story! Slowly building to a wonderful Climax

This is a great story! It builds slowly, gently exciting you. finally bringing you to a wonderful climax!

maninconnmaninconnalmost 15 years ago
Nice!

Very Nice! I want to meet her too!

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