by MissSenses
OK, I could niggle a wee bit. But I'm not going to. Your command of language is superb, and the strangeness of the story utterly convincing. And your fine treatment of the developing relationship is wonderful; your sex-description devoid of awful overused cliches, and all the hotter for it. It really worked for me, Miss!
MissSenses you have a way of making the reader feel every tingle. Superb!
This story was hot! With your superb literary skills, the reader can actually picture everything that is happening.
This is a great story! It builds slowly, gently exciting you. finally bringing you to a wonderful climax!