by FurLove
Congratulations to again a verry nice story.
I love to read all your stories and I'm always looking out for a new one.
This fairytail is written so that u can feel what the characters in this story experience.
My compliments and keep up the good writing.
This is not a Loving Wives tale but would be a fetish type story or maybe a romance. I feel like I had to waste too much time reading till I discovered it wasn’t going to turn into any kind of a Loving Wives story or anything I’m personally interested in. I would like to suggest you try and place your stories where they would be more appreciated.
Not trying to be too critical but there are a lot of typos and wrong words in the story and would suggest having an editor read them before you submit them.
I’m sure your stories will be appreciated by your fetish fans.
Regards
PLEASE proofread before you post! I found the constant switching between third person and first person perspective VERY irritating.
I know my wife and I will never experience anything close to the story, but it gives me a great feeling to just imagine something like this story could be true. Nothing like this exists- or does it?
I hope I'm wrong, and this story is true.
Furtastic, Furs are probably the most erotic clothing item, linked with an interesting story line, it went well.
A little more care on spelling and grammar, or use one of the editors, just to give the story the polish it needs.
That anyone made it through the first page. I’m sorry, this was bad.
Too weird "fur" me to really enjoy.
This is CLEARLY a major fetish with you and might be better suited there. Especially once you consider this whole thing was nothing but sex with fur involved. For everyone, for some reason.