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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
To be continued---?

Please con't

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Errr...

Sure this is a great start...! but quite short woaw %-).

Would love to read what's coming... some comprehensive rectal exam ;-)

0ra11yfix8ed0ra11yfix8edabout 18 years ago
Literoticus Interuptus!

This is a start and that's all. It would be better to at least advance the story to something more than the threat of some sort of domination. There are plenty of stories that play out the male fantasy of subordination to a beautiful and dominering female. The disappointment here lies in being unable to see into females side of the fantasy. Take us there!

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